Poem

WALT develop our own poem in response
to a model(packing my bags…..James
Norcliffe)

WALT an increasingly descriptive  vocabulary
to add interest to our writing 

WALT have some fun and be creative with
ideas and imagination.

I am going for a trip to the bottom of the
ocean I will need to take……

Scuba diving suit.

One silky smooth Scuba diving suit

That has metal that lets out heat

Soft spongy stuffing

A nice smooth salty grey on the outside

To keep me warm

Submarine

One big black submarine

On the inside It’s warm cosy ,soft ,spongy
and squishy

 On the outside it is a soft warm buttercup
yellow 

With black tinted windows 

To take me to the bottom of the ocean. 

One large air tank

That is mat black on the outside

And soft silver gray on the inside

That puffs out fresh air

To help me breath underwater when
I explore the ocean. 

A small underwater camera 

Thats soft grey 

With a transparent 50 inch screen 

To see out of when I am taking pictures

For taking pictures under the ocean
And of course my friend James 

So I don't get lonely