Hi James, Kade and Noah. Well done for using your writing skills to share your learning about the pōwhiri process. I liked that you organised your work into clear paragraphs and that you labeled who had done which part of the writing. I can see from this work that you have a pretty good understanding of the pōwhiri process and that when we go to the marae you will be able to participate in this process with respect and understanding.
In writing we need to keep working on making sure our sentences make sense (there was a bit that had to be fixed with me) and checking our spelling.
Hi James, Kade and Noah. Well done for using your writing skills to share your learning about the pōwhiri process. I liked that you organised your work into clear paragraphs and that you labeled who had done which part of the writing. I can see from this work that you have a pretty good understanding of the pōwhiri process and that when we go to the marae you will be able to participate in this process with respect and understanding.
ReplyDeleteIn writing we need to keep working on making sure our sentences make sense (there was a bit that had to be fixed with me) and checking our spelling.
Well done boys.