Monday 8 April 2019

If I had wings

For the past few weeks we have been doing poetry. This weeks task was a poem about If I Had Wings... First we had to answer some questions and then we had to colour in the piece of paper with the poem. Last of all we had to write our own If I Had Wings poem. We had to use sticky ( interesting ) language, use the five senses and use interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem



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  1. Unknown11 April 2019 at 14:02

    Hi James. I can see in your poem you used the senses and some interesting language like your simile, 'fly as fast as a jet.' Next time you need to work on using some more interesting adjectives. I liked the idea of going to Antarctica.

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