Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Hello James I know you know who I am but I think this is really cool and a really good description. My favourite part is where you say "the seagulls are flying in the nice shady sky." I hope the crocodile does not eat the surfer.
Thank you Benny
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Hello James I know you know who I am but I think this is really cool and a really good description. My favourite part is where you say "the seagulls are flying in the nice shady sky." I hope the crocodile does not eat the surfer.
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